Meggie Besaw
Assignment 3
English 102
Bill Bryson Is a best selling author. He
would write humorous books and books on traveling to science and English
language. I think he has a very broad audience, people who are into amusing
books can read his stuff and then people who are interested in a more serious
learning book can read his work. I found At
Home “Introduction” to be really interesting and made me think pretty deep
about the things he said, all the whys and what ifs and from what I looked up
about him the essay didn’t go along with his writing themes.
After reading The Kitchen I found it
interesting for only so many pages. It had a lot of information and was well
addressed for a research paper but it was the same thing every other page just
different food. I loved how it started off with a story I found that unique and
more alternative then traditional, it made me want to read more about it. I
don’t think that this fits one hundred percent in our academic model but I
think it had traits that fit into it. It had a lot of information and the
information was backed up. The story that drew me into wanting to read more in
the first paragraph was a unique just like we talked about in class on Tuesday.
Although it had a few things I think this class is looking for in a research
paper I think that the essay had more traditional ways then alternative. I
don’t think we are cutting out traditional completely because I think we need
some traditional in a research paper to structure it I do think though that
this essay had too much traditional and to much repetition with different types
of food.
Inquiry to me is when you analyze, look up,
and find out about a topic. I think the essay had a lot of that and I think
that is very important when writing a paper. The most important think I think
about inquiry is when you look up and find out about that topic that you
statistics and certain things to back that up. “Because bread was so important,
the laws governing it purity were strict and the punishment severe. A baker her
cheated his customers were fined 10 per loaf sold, or made to do a months hard
labor in prison”(The Kitchen, 68). That quote would be a prime example of
inquiry. He learned about a topic even backed it up with what would happen. The
only thing I’d change is find some hard evidence.
Meggie:
ReplyDeleteI am glad, first, that you were interested in this piece. I'm also glad that you are seeing how different each model is from each other, because you're right-- we're not simply "cutting out the traditional completely" but rather supplementing it for our own purposes.
Why do you think inquiry requires "backing something up"? I look forward to hearing more from you in class discussion.